Author: Brooke Edwards
Publisher: Dreamspinner Press
Cover Artist: Catt Ford
Rating: 2.5 of 5 Stars
Publication Date: 06/01/2015
Length: Novella (~ 15K-50K)
Genre: Contemporary, Gay Fiction
James Carter is forty-five and has been a police officer most of his life. He married young, lost her young, and his life revolved around his work and his son. Young is a recurring theme in his life, he thinks, when he meets the considerably younger AUSA Derek Moore on a case and finds himself ruled by the whims of his heart.
The road to love between a hotshot lawyer and a veteran cop was never going to be smooth, not in the real world, but there are criminals, misunderstandings, and a lack of communication standing in their way too. Both are so stubborn and convinced their interest is one-sided that it takes a murder case, exhaustion, and an adjournment for them to get their act together. They move fast after that, but they both know there’s no guarantee for tomorrow.
I had a hard time following this story, mainly because it is written in present tense.
James is a veteran cop crushing on attorney Derek from a far. The story has large time jumps and reads more like a story being retold by someone else. I never felt invested in the characters or was drawn into the story.
It was definitely a case of telling not showing here.
“Derek’s face clears a little, relief obvious, and James’s stomach sinks even further…”
I think the author could’ve gone deeper into James’s emotions here, more than just stating his stomach sank. Show me how he’s feeling, don’t just tell me.
I learned more about James reading the blurb than I did in the story. I admit to doing a lot of skimming just because I wasn’t pulled into the fictional world.
I would like to thank the publisher for providing me with the eARC of this title in exchange for my honest opinion.
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